Rose red and Snow White rough colour....

So I've been working on some pieces for my portfolio and was finding this quite tricky to get to this point just couldn't make it look cosy.
 Working on your own with only cats to ask for feedback isn't great, so I posted an earlier stage of this on twitter to get some criticisms on it and it's helped it tremendously. So the rough I think is looking much more there. Twitter can be a really useful tool if you work on your own. So thanks those that helped! :D